Storyboard

For my storyboard, I used arrows on relevant parts which show movements the actor makes. This is because the onlooker can understand the advert and how it develops more clearly. Also just using drawings would maybe convey there are gaps in the advert, whereas arrows make the shots flow better.

However there are some problems with this storyboard as well. I think it was a bad decision to colour it in. This is because it makes it look too hectic and tacky, which may blur someone's understanding of the shots. Also, it makes what's happening in the storyboard harder to see because the colour makes it look too busy. Lastly, I feel arrows are not enough for the audience to understand how the advert develops. This is because they only represent movement. To improve, I think I could have annotated various shots to show what is happening in this part of the advert so an audience can fully understand the concept.

Now I have completed my first storyboard, for my next one which is for my advert on Football, I am going to take into consideration, some of the things I could have improved on so that my next storyboard is better and more effective in planning my advert.